55 FFF ~Patchwork Heart

‘Twas their last day together.
 But he never came.

Quite unprepared with this one final goodbye, she turned her back even as her world crumbled and blurred. She put her earphones and sunglasses on to keep the silence away and the light from blinding her.

Heart's under repair.
Tomorrow's another day.


4 pinky-swear friends shared a thought or two...:

Hilda said...

Hmmm… maybe I should tell my husband and his friends about this FFF. Sounds like a great way to keep writers on their toes.

Love this line best of all: 'put her earphones and sunglasses on to keep the silence away' — so true of many people nowadays, and I find it sad.

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thanks BOB Matharoo

kathi said...

:: belated mingle ::

Loved reading your 55-word story. You've painted a very clear picture in only a few words.

Ram Bansal, the Theosoph said...

Very symbolic but enough expressive. Words selection is marvellous.